Yellowcake Springs: three quarters done

9 10 2009

Okay, I won’t make the mistake of putting a picture of a mushroom cloud into this post. I got a ridiculous amount of hits on the post last time I did that. Anyway, I managed to write nearly 11,000 words on my novel Yellowcake Springs over this past two weeks, which is just shy of the 12,000 words I had aimed to write. A common theme here. This means I am now the proud owner of 64,000 words or 221 double spaced pages, which represents around three quarters of the total manuscript. I had wanted the first draft to be 100,000 words in length, but I’m not going to get there. The book has really short chapters: 39 at the moment and more than 50 when completed. I myself like books with lots of short chapters. It makes them seem easier to get through. So I’m writing a book for lazy readers like myself.

The first draft will be finished in the summer holidays, Dec 09/Jan 10, and I expect I’ll have time to tinker with it extensively before returning to school (work) at the beginning of Feb 10. Next stop: world domination!

All right, this post wouldn’t be complete without a picture, so here’s a picture depicting a scene from my novel. Er, kinda:





More books to read – 2/10/09

2 10 2009

At the end of 2008 I was pleased to be able to say that I had read around 50 books in the year at the rate of one per week. I’m not entirely sure why, but I’ve read far fewer books in 2009, and with the year entering its final quarter, I thought it was time to read a couple more. So off I went to the two local secondhand bookstores here in Northam. I’ve got three to read now, but knowing me, I’ll be doing well to end up reading two of them.

Regeneration by Pat Barker – this is about Sigfreid Sassoon in World War One. I’ve had this open for weeks now, but I haven’t gotten around to finishing it yet. Quite compelling reading, but easy to put down, as I discovered.

Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini – I’ve definitely heard of this author, but only vaguely. I’ve barely looked at this, but it’s about Afghanistan and I like reading about different cultures. Sold.

Vignettes from the Late Ming translated by Yang Ye – I’m a sucker for anything Chinese, so I was sold on this straight away. It’s a collection of hsaio-p’in, a kind of prose vignette style from the Ming dynasty (17th century). Sold.

On another note, I am working on my novel Yellowcake Springs again. I’ve managed 5000 words so far in these school holidays, and I aim to write another 7000 words in the coming days, taking my ms. to 65,000 words in total. The entire ms. will be around 90,000 in first draft form.





Yellowcake Springs: aim for the stars, hit the trees

16 07 2009

I believe that it was a game developer who once said the following in relation to their upcoming release  (the game, Master of Orion 3, was a terrible flop, incidentally):

“Aim for the stars, hit the trees. Aim for the trees, hit the ground.”

The point of that statement, of course, is that the greater our ambitions are, the greater our achievements are likely to be, even if they don’t match said ambitions. I find this a very pertinent statement in relation to my own writing, as it never does reach the heights I imagine for it. Nothing ever comes out quite as good as it is in our heads. Anyway, my aim for these holidays was to write 20,000 words on Yellowcake Springs in 10 days. I’m pulling the pin today at 13,000 words in 8 days (today would have been the ninth). Why? Why not push on through the pain barrier?

I am fond of quoting William’s Burroughs famous (at least to me) statement:

“Writing that you do when you don’t feel like writing ain’t worth shit.”

And I didn’t feel like it this morning. I stared at the blank page, I cast my eyes uneasily over my paltry notes (the writing had virtually outstripped the planning), and I said, ‘No.’ This is surely one of the most useful words in the English language.

So now I have slightly more than 51,000 words, weighing in at 184 pages of double spaced script. With any luck, I’ll be ready to write another 20,000 words (read: 13,000) in the term 3 holidays in October…





The Method to My Madness Part Two, or Yellowcake Springs: 40 in 40

27 01 2009

I did it – I completed 40,000 words of my new novel Yellowcake Springs in 40 days, leaving me one more day of my summer holiday to bask in glory. I’ll get to basking in a minute. It was a struggle for much of this time and there were a dozen reasons why I could have given up, but I didn’t, so now I’m the proud owner of 138 double spaced pages of print. Yippee.

The madness is  in thinking that all of this means something, that I am (or at least might be) on the road to success, even if I can’t write an entire novel in 28 days or less – not without the relevant CD anyway ;) The madness is in attempting to write a novel when you’ve got six weeks of freedom only, and by freedom I mean about two hours in the morning when my wife frees me from the need to look after my 3 and 1 year-old children. That’s the mad part.

The method is in having adapted my writing to fit around the strictures of my workaday existence.  I am now in the habit of writing novels over the course of two very distinct six week blocks, over the period of two years. I wrote The Kingdom of Four Rivers in Dec 06/Jan 07 and Dec 07/Jan 08 (with revision taking me up to April 08), and now it looks like I might be able to write Yellowcake Springs in Dec 08/Jan 09 (done) and Dec 09/Jan 10. I’m actually starting to like this method, as it gives me several months to chew over what I’ve done already with a view to preparing for the second stint. I’m relieved NOT to have the time to continue now, for I’m very definitely out of steam (and out of planning). So now I’ll turn my attention to my job for a while, and leave the subconscious to do the work I know it can.





Yellowcake Springs – 25 in 24

11 01 2009

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Thousand of words in number of days, that is. I’ve crawled my way to 25,000 words in 24 days, which means I’m on track to reach my lower target of 40,000 words by the 29th of Jan. 50k seems out of the question, but I’m not overly concerned. Now I’m off to Dongara for a few days, but fear not, my trusty laptop will be travelling with me, even if it is missing the ‘c’ key. With any luck I’ll be up to about 30,000 words by the time we come back on Friday. Until then…





Yellowcake Springs – back on track

30 12 2008

After a difficult time over the Christmas period, in which I was able to write a meagre 1000 words in 4 (!) days,  I’m now back on track. After a good session this morning I’m up to just over 12,000 words in 12 days.  That’s 42 double spaced pages, and at this rate I should have close to 150 by the time I’m due back at work on Jan 29.





Shortcuts to Success? Can I write Yellowcake Springs in 28 days or less?

23 12 2008

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I stumbled upon this while trawling the net today. It’s well worth a look for any aspiring author or interested person:

www.writequickly.com/author/menu.aspx

It turns out I can write a novel in just 28 days, working for less than 1 hour a day! You beauty! I can be finished with Yellowcake Springs shortly before school starts in something like 35 more days. Thereafter, I can presumably get cracking on another novel, which can be done well inside the end of Term 1.

Madness.

Some of the secrets include the ‘Freewriting’ method (hey, it’d be way too difficult to think about what you’re doing while you’re doing it, right?), writing in five minute segments, so as not to lose interest, and Power-Editing, in which you can edit your entire book in just one hour. Far out. And to think I’ve been struggling on for all these years, thinking 1000 words a day for 40 or so days a year was a reasonable effort. No, my own progress has been glacial at best. No wonder I haven’t made my millions yet. I’d better hurry up and order Nick Daws’ Write Any Book in Just 28 Days…Or Less! quick smart.

Listen up, dear reader. I’ve got a piece of advice to give you…for free. There aren’t any shortcuts to success. No yellowbrick road. You could probably write a book in 28 days, in fact several people can do it. But why? It’s not a race. In five years or fifty years, who will care how long a book took to write?

So there’s my thought for the day. If people took more time thinking about what they were doing, and less time ‘galloping forward in their course, unable to stop’ (thanks Zhuangzi), then we’d all be in better shape than we are today.

Oh, and I’ve managed a paltry 6000 words in the past five days.





Yellowcake Springs: it begins

18 12 2008

School is finished for the year, which means I have 41 days of (comparative) freedom ahead of me. In the summers of 06/07 and 07/08 I wrote The Kingdom of Four Rivers, which is currently looking for a home. With any luck, my new novel, Yellowcake Springs, can be written in the summers of 08/09 and 09/10. At least that’s the theory. To make this happen, I need to write the first half of the first draft in the next 41 days. Say I give myself Xmas Day off, that gives me 40 days to do it in. I will set myself two targets: a lower target of 40,000 words (i.e. 1000 words a day) and an upper target of 50,000. I like the length of The Kingdom of Four Rivers, which was almost 100,000 words in first draft and 82,000 by the latest draft, so I will aim for around 100,000 words again for the first draft of this new novel.

I won’t be posting daily but I might provide the occasional update. I’m sure that this isn’t of interest to anyone, but it might help to motivate me. Wish me luck!





The Method to my Madness, Or Why I Don’t Do NaNoWriMo

4 12 2008

I don’t do National Novel Writing Month, or NaNoWriMo. It’s a great concept – to write 50,000 words in the month of November each year and call it a novel – but I don’t do it. This is because my workaday life prevents me from writing in the mornings, which is my preferred time to write. I’ve seen writers’ blogs with tallies of how many words they have written in such and such a time. I’ve even seen a couple that represents this visually in the form of a ‘health bar’ (if you play computer games you’ll know what I mean). I don’t do this at all. Not only do I not do NaNoWriMo, I don’t even attempt to stick to a daily regimin of words written. What kind of a writer does that?

Well, it’s not a race. If you wrote a thousand words a day every day for a year, you’d have 365, 000 words by year’s end. That’s much more than the length of the average novel these days. You’d crack a million in three years. But would those million words be any good, and how would you shape them into something you could try to sell? I suppose it depends on how you operate as a writer. I suspect that we are all different, and that the aforementioned method works for some people. Most writers try to stick to a daily routine, a small percentage of whom actually manage to adhere to said routine, and others write in short, sustained bursts. Hence NaNoWriMo. Unfortunately, November isn’t a good month for me. None of the months bar January are. My NaNoWriMo takes place each year during the school summer holidays. This year the period in question begins on Friday 19th Dec and ends on Wednesday 29th Jan. 42 short days. And in those six weeks I aim, not to write an entire novel, but half of one.

Circumstances have dictacted that I, like 99.99% of all the writers in the world, need a day job to pay the bills. Those two words, ‘day job,’ seem to suggest that the writing, if there is any, takes place in the night, no? For myself, that day job is teaching. Due to the way that my brain seems to operate, I can’t countenance the idea of writing in the afternoons, or early in the morning before school, or exclusively on the weekends. ‘No,’ my mind says. ‘I won’t do it.’

Or, in the words of one of the writers I admire most (William S. Burroughs): ‘Writing you do when you don’t feel like writing ain’t worth shit.’

So I have shaped my creative life around the tyranny of WORK. This is how a year generally goes for me. Bear in mind that a) I only started this routine in 2006/07 and b) why would you care what I think anyway, seeing as I haven’t had a novel accepted for publication yet? To illustrate this, I began planning for my novel The Kingdom of Four Rivers toward the end of 2006. I wrote around 50,000 words, approximately the first half of the novel, in the holidays of 06/07. Then the project lay dormant for eleven months during the 2007 school year. In the summer of 07/08, I completed the first draft (another 50,000 words). But then I had a goal – to enter the TAG Hungerford Award, which closed at the end of June. This caused me to spend around three months DURING the 2008 school year tinkering with my manuscript, trimming it down from a flabby 100, 000 to a trim 86, 000 words. Using this method, I wager I can produce a novel every two years without a) writing during the school term b) writing on the weekends) and c) beating myself up about it.

Even better, most of the year is spend doing other things. I have observed that I go through distinct phases in the creative process, many of which appear to have nothing to do with writing at all. Sometime during the year, I will manage to read dozens of books, mainly in the form of novels. This year I read well over 50, most of which were read between the months of February and June. I call this a ‘reading binge.’ Then there are the dormant times, of which there are many. During these periods, I try not to think or writing or even of reading at all. Generally, creative oblivion is reached through PC games, my other passion. We also have the planning phase, in which I begin, over a period of weeks, to plan the new project. I am in this phase at the moment. And finally, there is the writing itself. Four distinct phases or states: reading, dormancy, planning and writing.
To announce my own intentions then, I am currently planning to write what I hope will be my second published novel, currently titled Yellowcake Springs. This is another science fiction novel, but at least it will be set in Australia this time. (This is a mixed blessing.) I aim to write at least 42, 000 words and hopefully around 50, 000 over the course of 42 days in December and January. If all goes to plan, I will finish the first draft in the summer of 09/10 and have the project completed in time to enter the 2010 Vogel and/or other awards.

So there it is: the scheme behind my mad ways.